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by lashaunte wade (lashauntew@gmail.com)
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Genre: Horror
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YEARNING (COPY)
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INT. YOU'RE ALRIGHT NOW-FLASHBACK - DAY |
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Screen Black
(hear girl breathing hard(faint scream in background, then a
thud)
camera pan to door
Jessame and Lisa come through door laughing coming from
eating and partying. |
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Lisa heads to kitchen to get them drinks and Jessame heads
to couch and gets everything set up for them to get high,
chill and watch TV. |
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LISA
(GIVE JESSAME
DRINK AND SIT
NEXT TO HER)
Here ya go. |
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Lisa starts flipping through channels and getting high, been
smoking for hours, drinking, etc. |
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Camera pans to door. Loud banging on door.
Jessame and Lisa look at each other worried. Another loud
bang. They jump a little bit. |
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DAVID
(banging on door,
upset,angry)
JESS OPEN THE DOOR!
(BANGS AGAIN)
OPEN THE DOOR! I KNOW YOU'RE IN
THERE! |
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Jessame heads to door and opens it up. David pushes door
into her hard. walks in furious. |
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DAVID
(FURIOUS)
Where the fuck were you last
night? |
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JESSAME
I was with Lisa it was her
birthday yesterday. We went out. |
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Lisa stands up and gets ready to defend Jessame. |
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LISA
(scared, but
defensive)
It's true David, it was- |
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JESSAME
(pushes David)
DON'T YELL AT HER! |
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David grabs Jessame's throat and pushes her into wall.
Choking her harder every second. Jessame tries to loosen his
grip. |
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DAVID
(CHOKING JESSAME)
I NEVER SAID YOU COULD GO
ANYWHERE. |
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Jessame is about to pass out. Lisa starts hitting David and
David lets go of Jessame.
Jessame is on floor trying to breathe and gain full
consciousness.
David goes for Lisa and starts beating her. |
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Jessame is coming to and able to get herself up, but is
doing it slowly.
She sees Lisa laying on ground while David is choking her
(eyes are still trying to focus), she can hear Lisa yelling
for her.
David is fixated on Lisa so does not notice Jessame. |
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DAVID
(is on ground and
chokes her,
whispers in her
ear)
I'm going to fucking kill you.
(smiles) |
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Camera pans to Lisa's beaten face, all bloody.
Then Jessame comes from behind and stabs David in the neck,
with her small knife, David turns around, gets up and takes
knife out and goes for Jessame, he slams her into wall
again and stabs her once in the stomach.
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Jessame falls to floor and David grabs her hair to stand her
up, but Jessame punches him in the stomach. David drops the
small knife and Jessame is able to grab the knife again. She
stabs him and pushes him away. |
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David comes for another attempt (David is bleeding out while
all this is happening). They both hit the ground and are
struggling over the knife. David comes close to stabbing her
again. Jessame grabs all her strength and stabs him in his
throat.
David is bleeding all over her. She lies there in shock
(sad, about to cry). Looks at Lisa (Lisa is badly beaten,
barely moving, but breathing). |
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Jessame tries to remain calm, pushes David off of her and
she tries to wipe the blood off her face. Then tries to wipe
it off on shirt, but it just keeps covering her more and
more. Jessame starts crying. |
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INT. WAKING UP - DAY |
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Screen is black. Alarm clock goes off. (Title shows up on
black screen, goes away), cue Jessame sleeping, opens her
eyes & starts to wake up, turns off alarm.
(Cue song in background)
Jessame does her daily morning routine (Brush teeth, get
dressed, etc) Cue Jessame leaving house and going to
Starbucks to get a coffee. (gets in car, drives to work,
parks in space) (End background music).
Jessame gets out of car and heads into work and goes into
meeting. |
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INT. NEW ARTIST MEETING - DAY |
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Everybody is in meeting. Lisa is talking (inaudible).
Camera is outside of office meeting for a moment. Jessame
walks in building, camera goes into office. |
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LISA
(friendly but
stern)
OK guys so I will need everyone's
portfolio for next weeks
exhibition by 9am tomorrow and get
(MORE)
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LISA (cont'd)
started on the love exhibition
that's next month and have your
drafts on my desk in a week.
Any questions? Alright guys get to
work. |
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Meeting ends and the employees disperse. |
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INT. OFFICE GOSSIP - DAY |
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Camera pans to Julie. |
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JULIE
So what do you think about our
boss? |
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VICTOR
She gets shit done, unlike someone
I know. |
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JULIE
Fuck you...I dunno there's
something about her I don't like.
Everything about her screams
bitch. |
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Lisa has been eavesdropping.
Lisa Steps in conversation. |
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LISA
(walks towards
Jessame, looks
back)
stop gossiping and start doing
your jobs. |
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INT. OFFICE GOSSIP-BREAK ROOM - DAY |
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Jessame is eating a granola bar and Lisa walks in with a
smile. |
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JESSAME
hey whats up. How'd the meeting
go? |
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LISA
Good, everybody was on time for a
change and everything went smooth.
(NOTICES JESS IS A
LITTLE OFF)
you ok? |
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JESSAME
I'm OK, just a little tired.
Didn't sleep much last night. |
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Screen is black. you hear girls laughing in background and
someone falling and a loud laughter. |
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INT. WHERE IT ALL BEGAN-FLASHBACK - EVENING |
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AT A HOUSE PARTY. |
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Jess and Lisa are already drunk and high arriving at party
stumbling and laughing.
They get inside the house and go straight to kitchen. |
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PARTY CROWD
(DRUNK, EXCITED)
HEY!!!! |
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JESSAME
(laughs, stumbles)
HEY!!! (laughs) Rob! what's up!
(goes to give hug)
how ya been? |
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ROB
(hugs jess)
good good. you? how you been? You
guys fucked up already?
(smiles hugs Lisa)
Miss Lisa, how ya been? |
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LISA
(happy)
I'm good! good. Living life! |
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Rob grabs Lisa close and gets her a drink. Jessame laughs
and gets a beer and goes to living room.
She's looking around, and notices David.
Their eyes lock and everything goes silent and all you hear
is her heart beating in a medium-fast pace.
Lisa bumps into her and snaps out of it. |
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LISA
(bumps into
Jessame playingly)
Hey! what'd you get to drink? |
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JESSAME
I just grabbed a beer.
(looks for David
again)
Hey, do you know who that kid is
right there? |
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LISA
(looks where Lisa
points)
Uh...(squints, almost falls back)
yeah. That's uh...that's one of
Rob's friends. Just moved here I
think. He looks like he's trouble
(smiles). |
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JESSAME
(laughs, holds
Lisa up)
OK...lets sit down...you're fuckin
heavy |
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EXT. SURPRISE - DAY |
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STREET-JESS GALLERY |
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Camera is in car with Jessame and Lisa.
Jessame is taking Lisa to the new gallery to surprise her.
Lisa is Blindfolded. |
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LISA
So where are we going? |
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JESSAME
(looks at her,
smiles)
It's a surprise. |
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Jessame drives to gallery, parks, turns car off, turns to
Lisa. |
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JESSAME
(excited)
OK, we're here...Now before I take
the blindfold off, Promise me you
won't freak out. |
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LISA
(chuckles)
What did you do now Jess? |
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JESSAME
(laughs)
Nothing. Just promise me. |
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LISA
(smiles)
Fine. I promise. |
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Jessame gets out of car and opens door for Lisa. Jess helps
Lisa out and walks her to be in front of Gallery. |
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JESSAME
(Takes blindfold
off)
Surprise! |
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LISA
(Shocked)
Oh..wow...Jess...I dunno... |
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JESSAME
Don't freak out I have it covered.
Ive been talking to some investors
and they really like the concept
and idea of the gallery. |
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LISA
Who...how'd you pay for this? |
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JESSAME
(excited)
They gave me an advancement before
even reading the proposal! They
said to give them a month to look
over things and research, blah
blah.
(MORE)
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JESSAME (cont'd)
(faces Lisa)
Hey, only thing that matters is I
got the money and that we can
start our own gallery...our
way...we are in control of our own
destiny now. |
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Lisa smiles at her. Jessame smiles back and gives her a hug.
Lisa looks worried, pats Jess on back. |
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EXT. NIGHTTIME JOG - EVENING |
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There's a young lady jogging with her IPOD on her arm and
one ear piece in her ear. She is in the moment jogging. She
stops to catch her breath a little bit and then she
stretches her legs for a minute due to a little cramp.
Proceeds on With jogging. As she jogs she thinks she hears
something in the woods and goes to see what it is.
She looks a little bit off the path, but goes back to path
to start jogging and chuckles a little bit. She starts to
put both ear pieces back in her ears and after she does
that, someone comes from behind and hits her with a rock. |
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INT. CONCERNED - DAY |
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Camera pans to Lisa making breakfast. Smell of bacon in the
air. Eggs and fruit already on plate. Lisa finishes cooking
bacon and gets ready to eat, but there is a knock on the
door.
She looks through peephole and sees Victor. |
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LISA
(smiles)
Hey! Good morning.
(goes back to
plate to eat)
thanks for coming to pick me up
while my car's in the shop. |
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VICTOR
(grabs a piece of
bacon)
No problem. |
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Victor goes into fridge to grab some orange juice and an
apple. As Lisa is eating she is watching the news and there
is a reporter on jogging trail telling people that a womans'
body was found strangled and brutally beaten. Also to tell
people (specifically women) to be careful when jogging.
camera pans to Lisa after report is over. |
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VICTOR
I know. I've been keeping up on it
here and there and so far this guy
has killed 6 women. They said they
still think there's more to be
found. |
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LISA
That's terrible! Jess and I run
over there all the time. |
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VICTOR
So how's Jess doing? She seems
kind of stressed. |
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LISA
She's OK, you know ever since Jess
got the promotion over Julie,
Julie has been making it very
difficult for her.
(pauses, takes a
drink)
She showed me this gallery she
bought too. |
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VICTOR
(surprised, smiles)
Is that right? How'd she get the
money so fast? |
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LISA
She said some investors gave her
an advancement, but they haven't
given her the full OK to fund the
gallery. |
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VICTOR
So they haven't said they'll be
partners yet? Crazy. So why give
her an advancement? |
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LISA
I have no clue. If they back out
I'm guessing she'll have to give
money back.
(sighs)
I just know she's been saving up
for something like this for a few
years now. |
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VICTOR
So when does she find out? |
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LISA
She said in about a month so they
can research and read through
everything. I'm hoping that they
partner with her. |
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VICTOR
Well good luck to her.
(takes last sip,
looks at watch)
we gotta go, don't want the boss
lady to be mad at us for being
late. |
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Lisa finishes up last bites of food and grabs her purse.
Victor and Lisa head out the door. |
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INT. CONCERNED-OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER |
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Jessame is sorting through portfolios and going through
research papers so she can meet with her boss today, but
notices Julie's portfolio isn't there and is upset. Jessame
calls Julie into her office and get into a slightly tense
conversation. |
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JESSAME
(gets up from
chair, heads to
door)
Julie, can I see you in my office? |
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Julie still talking to Victor as if she doesn't hear her. |
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JESSAME
(shocked, pissed)
Julie |
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Julie continues to ignore her. Jessame is really irritated.
She walks up to her and gets in front of Victor. |
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JESSAME
(looks at Victor,
smiles)
breaks over |
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Victor looks kind of nervous because of how Jessame looked
at him. Victor leaves and Jess looks back at Julie. |
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JESSAME
(crosses arms)
Did you not hear me calling you? |
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JULIE
(rolls eyes)
Yeah I heard you. What do you
want? |
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JESSAME
I would like to think I would get
the respect I deserve as your
boss, but obviously we are never
going to be on the same page. |
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JULIE
(sarcastic smirk)
Great, I'm glad you understand. |
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JESSAME
(grabs Julie's
wrist)
Everyone seems to give me their
portfolios on time, except you.
Now, I don't know if you're just
stupid or if you really just want
to piss me off, but if I don't
have your portfolio on my desk in
ten minutes, I will fire you. |
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JULIE
(trying to break
free wrist)
Let me go. What's your problem? |
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JESSAME
(Lets go of
Julie's wrist)
Do you understand? |
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JULIE
(grabs wrists to
relieve pain)
Yes. |
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Lisa walks in and notice Julie holding wrist and Jessame
walking back to her office. |
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LISA
(walks up to Julie)
Hey you OK? |
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JULIE
(Upset)
You better tell that bitch to
watch her back. She's going to be
so fucking sorry she messed with
me. |
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Julie walks off and grabs her portfolio and goes into
Jessame's office and slams on desk. |
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JULIE
(threatening,
smiling)
Enjoy your office while you still
have it. |
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Julie and Jessame stare at each other for a minute. Julie
walks out and Jess watches her leave with such rage, balling
fist up and trying her best not to show how enraged she is.
Black screen |
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INT. THE ONE AND ONLY-FLASHBACK - NIGHT |
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You hear passenger door close and then you hear driver door
close. The car starts and camera shows Rob and David in car
driving to Jessame and Lisa's house. |
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DAVID
So... what's up with Lisa's
friend? From what I saw her and
Lisa are joined at the hips and
she doesn't talk much too. Lisa
seems to be the talker. |
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ROB
(laughs)
Jess! not talk!? yeah right. She's
a talker, you just have to get to
know her. She's a freak man. Your
type. A fighter. She likes to play
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ROB (cont'd)
games.
(nudges david)
Like I said, She's a freak. She
enjoys torturing men. |
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DAVID
(chuckles)
You make that shit not sound
appealing at all. |
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INT. THE ONE AND ONLY-FLASHBACK - MOMENTS LATER |
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Camera is out of car and shows Rob and David pulling up to
Lisa and Jessame's place. They get out of the car and grab
liquor and beer and head to the door. David knocks on the
door. |
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LISA
(O.S.Behind door,
muffled sound)
Who is it? |
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Camera still on David and Rob. Conversation between Lisa and
them is between a door. |
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LISA
(O.S.Behind door,
muffled sound)
SORRY...I don't know who us is! |
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ROB
(Kicks door)
COME ONE OPEN UP! THESE CASES
AREN'T GETTING LIGHTER. |
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Lisa opens the door and peeks from behind it and smiles. |
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LISA
(SMILES, EXCITED)
Hey, Guys! About time! Thought you
stood us up (Kisses Rob). |
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Rob and David come in and set the Beer and Liquor down on
the counter. |
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LISA
Hey David, How are you? |
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DAVID
I'm good, how are you? |
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LISA
In the room changing. She just got
out of the shower.
(YELLS)
JESS! THE GUYS ARE HERE! |
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JESSAME
(O.S. IN ROOM)
OK! I'LL BE OUT IN A SECOND! |
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David grabs a beer out of case and hands it to rob, he grabs
two more and gives one to Lisa. He puts the other beer on
the counter for Jess. |
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LISA
(POINTS AT BEER)
Uh, She's gonna want something
stronger. Did you bring anything
else? |
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DAVID
Um, yeah we got whiskey, vodka and
tequila. Which one does she like? |
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LISA
The whiskey.
(points to
cabinets)
The cups are in that cabinet over
there. |
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David goes towards the cabinet Lisa pointed to and grabs a
glass, puts it on the counter and pours the whiskey in the
glass. As he is pouring Jessame comes out the room in sweats
and a tank top with no bra on so you can see her nipples
hard through the tank top.
David can't help but stare at her. David hands Jessame her
drink. |
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JESSAME
(Smiles, bites lip)
Thanks. |
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DAVID
(smiles)
You're welcome. |
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Rob and Lisa walk away from the kitchen and into the living
room. |
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LISA
(looks over couch)
Hey, are you guys going to come
over here?, or are you going to
keep eye fucking each other? |
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Jess and David stop looking at each other and head towards
the couch, as they do Lisa stops them. |
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LISA
(Puts hands up to
stop them)
Whoa whoa whoa! (pauses) Don't
forget the beverages ladies! |
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jessame switches her drink in other hand and grabs the
whiskey and tequila bottle and David brings a case of beer.
They sit down and watch a movie.
Moments pass with them drinking and smoking weed. Camera
circles around them every time they are doing something
different. Camera slows down and faces Lisa and Rob who are
passed out. Jess and David are up and still smoking and
drinking.
Camera moves to David and Jess. |
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JESSAME
(high, low voice)
So...how do you know Rob? |
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DAVID
We are childhood friends, nothing
special. |
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JESSAME
(nods head,
awkward moment)
So...
(take last swig of
drink)
I'm going to bed, I'm tired (leans
in and kisses David). Good night. |
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Jessame gets up and staggers to her room. She turns around
and looks at David. |
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JESSAME
(soft)
Hey, you coming or what? |
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David is taken by surprise and it takes him a minute to
process what is going on right now, but he gets up and walks
to Jessame. |
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DAVID
You want me to lay down with you? |
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David gets face to face with her. |
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JESSAME
(grabs his shirt
and brings him
closer)
Yeah, I wouldn't have asked if I
didn't want you.
(She takes her
shirt off and
backs up further
into room)
You don't want me? |
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DAVID
(walks in her room)
Yeah I want you. |
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JESSAME
(Takes pant off)
Then come here. |
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David comes closer and Jessame grabs him and kisses him.
David takes his shirt off and he grabs her and they get into
the bed. David and Jess passionately kiss as the screen
blacks in and out showing David Kissing her on her lips and
her neck. Screen continues to black in and out showing
Jessame on top now and her kissing David on his lips,
stomach, etc.
You can hear the soft, passionate moaning and can see that
they are both connecting with each other. The screen goes
black and the last thing you hear is a soft orgasm. |
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EXT. THE FIRST ENCOUNTER - AFTERNOON |
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After the confrontation with Julie, Jessame races downtown
to corporate offices to submit all portfolios to her boss.
She get out of the car and calls Lisa to let her know she is
there. While she is talking she is also trying to get the
portfolios organized and positioned right in her arms.
She begins to hold her phone with her ear and tries to push
up portfolios with her knee. As she does this she is not
paying attention to where she is walking and bumps right
into James hard, knocking everything out of her hand, but
her phone. |
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JESSAME
(Kneels down to
pick up papers)
Fuck, I'll call you back. |
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JAMES
(Kneels down to
help)
Shit. Sorry about that, let me
help you. |
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JESSAME
(Looks and stares
at James)
It's fine, it's my fault. |
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You can hear her heart pounding like how it was when she
first saw David for the first time. |
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JESSAME
(snaps out of it)
Sorry...I'm being weird. |
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JAMES
(chuckles)
Nah... You're not being too weird.
(smiles)
So... I was thinking right now
that you should probably let me
make this up to you. Especially
now since your probably late now
if you weren't before.
(writes down
number on back of
paper)
call me if you want. You're
decision, but I guarantee you
won't be disappointed. |
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They both raise up. |
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JESSAME
(looks at paper)
Thanks. |
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JAMES
Well, have a good rest of your day
(hinting that he wants her
name)... |
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JESSAME
Oh! Jessame.
(shakes his hand)
Names Jessame. (smiles) |
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JAMES
Have a good day Jessame. |
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She walks off, but then looks back and see that James is
still looking and she smiles and waves.
Camera pans to James and focuses on him with a sly smile.
James then continues to walk down the sidewalk to go to
wherever he was headed. |
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INT. THE VERY BAD THINGS-FLASHBACK - EVENING |
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Lisa and Jess's place looks like a hotbox. Camera pans
around the room and zooms in on the drugs that they are
taking.
The room is lit low, the music is playing softly in the
background. Lisa and rob are sitting next to each other
(Lisa's head is on Rob's shoulder) and Jessame head is on
David's lap.
Rob gets up to grab a beer. |
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ROB
(turns around and
point)
Hey you guys want one? |
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DAVID
Yeah, bring me a few. |
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ROB
(pauses for a
moment, chuckles,
opens fridge)
OK, a beer and a few beers coming
up. |
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Rob heads back to table with armful of beer. Hands a beer to
Lisa and David and then set the rest on table and grabs one
for himself. They all take a drink and then Rob takes out a
bag and makes a few lines from the cocaine he had brought. |
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DAVID
Well ladies I guess tonight you're
gonna enjoy yourselves. |
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David makes a line for Jessame and himself. He snorts his
line and looks at Jessame. Jessame does her line.Rob makes
Lisa a line and Rob snorts his line first then Lisa does
hers.
Jessame then grabs two ecstasy pills and chugs it down with
her drink she had on the table. |
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LISA
(high, but still
concerned)
Take it easy Jess. |
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JESSAME
(smiles, assuring)
I'm OK...It's not a good time
unless you go hard right? |
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David leans in towards Jessame and begins to blow gently in
her ear. She feels the tingling sensation going up and down
her body.
The physical attraction toward David and Jess is intense.
They lock eyes. Jess breathes deep with excitement.
David gets up and extends his hand out. Jess grabs his hand
and he helps her up and they head to her room. |
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LISA
(Gets on top of
Rob and looks
towards Jess)
Have fun you two (smiles, looks
back at Rob and starts kissing
(MORE)
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INT. THE VERY BAD THINGS-FLASHBACK - MOMENTS LATER |
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David and Jess go inside her room and David shuts the door.
Jess turns around and looks at him with such love and
intensity and David looks the same way. David moves closer
to her and grabs her and pulls her in.
They are face to face as if they were going to kiss, but
don't. She fights it at first. David grabs her face gently
and kisses her passionately.
They are right at the edge of the bed. They stop kissing for
just a moment. Jessame takes off her top and goes back to
kissing David. He lays her down gently and takes his shirt
off. He lays on top of her and moves his hands back up from
her leg to her face. He kisses her. |
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DAVID
(whispers
passionately, and
grabs face)
I fucking love you. |
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JESSAME
(looks at David,
whispers)
Don't ever leave me. |
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DAVID
(kisses Jess)
I'll never leave you. You're mine. |
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Jessame turns David over so she is on top. David sits up and
starts kissing her all over she lets out a soft moan and the
screen goes black. |
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INT. LISA BDAY - NIGHT |
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It's Lisa's Birthday and everyone is at Jessame's Place
celebrating. Everyone from work, friends and family gather
around the cake. |
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Everyone cheers and claps. Lisa blows out her candles. She
cuts the cake and gives everyone a slice. After cake is
handed out people disperse and hold separate conversations.
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Lisa and Jessame are by cake talking. |
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JESSAME
(hugs Lisa with
excitement)
Happy birthday! You one year older
and 29 years stupider (smiles). |
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LISA
(laughs and pushes
Jess)
Shut up don't remind me of how old
I'm getting. I'm freaking out.
(laughs and then
gets a little
serious)
So thanks for the party. I really
appreciate it. |
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JESSAME
(smiles)
No problem. |
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They both hug each other. Lisa has a worried look on her
face like she's nervous to tell her what she wants to say. |
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JESSAME
OK...what's wrong? |
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LISA
(hesitant)
Nothing...actually I was going to
tell you sooner, but I forgot. |
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JESSAME
Forgot to tell me what? |
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LISA
Well, there's this major art
gallery in Washington D.C. that is
looking for curators for an
apprenticeship.
I applied for it and I'll know in
a few weeks if I got it or not. |
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JESSAME
(eyes big, shocked)
What?...that's...that's great! |
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LISA
If I do get it, I will be getting
paid a salary while I'm learning
over there, plus they take care of
my housing and they said I have
two weeks to get my stuff together
and move over there. |
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JESSAME
That's awesome, you'll get it.
Don't worry. |
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LISA
I know this is unexpected, but I'm
glad I have your support. |
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JESSAME
I'll always be there for you.
(picks up a box by
cake)
With that said...(presents box)
Happy birthday. (smiles) |
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LISA
(opens box, smiles)
Oh my god...
(takes necklace
out of box)
Thank you! I love it! |
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They smile and hug. Lisa goes off and talks to another
group. Jessame is still by the cake. She is upset about the
news she was given. She feels like Lisa is trying to leave
her and distance herself from her now. She puts a smile on
and continues as if she is still having a good time.
Screen goes black. |
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INT. GOING SHOPPING - MORNING |
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Camera is on Jessame in top view showing face to chest.
Jessame opens eyes before Alarm goes off and waits for alarm
to go off. Alarm sounds and she turns it off, sits up,
scratches head and does her daily morning routine. Jessame
isn't working today , so she wears sweats and a tank top.
Hair is pulled back and has no makeup on.
There's a knock on the door, so she walks towards the door
and camera faces Jess. |
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Camera faces Lisa. |
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LISA
(excited)
It's me Lisa, Open up! |
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Jess unlocks door and opens it. Lisa rushes in with
excitement with a letter in her hand. |
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LISA
I GOT THE APPRENTICESHIP!!!! CAN
YOU BELIEVE IT! |
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JESSAME
Oh my god thats great! So when do
you leave? |
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LISA
Two weeks from now. I already
called in and told them I'll be
leaving. So there's no turning
back now. I can't believe it! |
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JESSAME
I'm happy for you, this is good.
You deserve it. |
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LISA
Yeah, we've been through a lot. I
can't believe this is happening!
I'm going to miss you. |
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JESSAME
(hugs Lisa)
I'll miss you too...Now stop being
all mushy and let me make you
breakfast. |
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Lisa goes and sits down on couch and turns TV on and Jessame
starts to make breakfast. Lisa puts it on the news since its
still morning and another new break of 2 more female bodies
found in the woods. |
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LISA
(shakes head)
They still haven't caught the guy
who is killing these girls. Now
they're saying he picks them up
(MORE)
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LISA (cont'd)
somewhere else and dumps them in
the woods. So they have no
evidence . |
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JESSAME
They'll find him, guys like that
usually fuck up once they get out
of control or pick the wrong girl. |
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LISA
Well I hope they find him soon. I
get nervous running at night now. |
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JESSAME
(smiles)
So run in the day. |
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LISA
(smiles)
Whatever, asshole. You need to be
careful too. All those guys you go
on dates with. They're weirdos. |
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JESSAME
Speaking of Weirdos. I met this
guy while I was on my way to drop
off the portfolios to corporate
the other day and he was really
cute. |
|
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JESSAME
I don't know I didn't ask. I
bumped into and all my stuff got
knocked down, that's why I said
I'll call you back
remember?...Anyway, he helped me
and then he gave me his number. |
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JESSAME
Yeah we had lunch the other day. |
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LISA
(laughs)
Yeah I bet you had lunch.Look, I
know you like guys that are
dangerous and mysterious, so all
(MORE)
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LISA (cont'd)
I'm saying is be careful. |
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She plates up the breakfast and places them on the table. |
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JESSAME
Don't worry about me. I know what
I'm doing. If I feel he's getting
too weird and I don't feel
comfortable around him, I'll break
it off.
I promise. |
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They both sit down and they enjoy their breakfast. |
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EXT. GIVE IN - LATER |
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A few weeks later, Jessame and James go on a jog. Jessame
starts to slow down as she is out of breath from the long
jog they did. |
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JESSAME
(Breathing hard)
Stop...I need to rest. |
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Jessame sits down to rest on the grass. James sits next to
her and hands her some water. |
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JESSAME
(Takes water,
drinks)
Thanks. |
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Still breathing kind of hard, Jessame lays down and catches
breath. James is still sitting up. |
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JESSAME
It's nice out huh? |
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JAMES
(Nods Head)
Yeah. Nice breeze. Not too muggy
like yesterday. |
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JESSAME
Yesterday I was so uncomfortable. |
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They stop talking for just a moment. Observing there
surroundings. |
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JESSAME
Hey do you ever get like really
bad urges. Ones that you can't
help but give in to? |
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JAMES
(leans in and
smiles)
Like how bad?
(kisses her again)
If you think you'll enjoy it or it
will make you feel better...then
do it (kisses her more and gets on
top of her). |
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Camera is on Jess and James making out on grass and then
camera pans off into another part of the park. |
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INT. LISA, JAMES, JAMES, LISA - AFTERNOON |
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James and Jess are just enjoying the day, holding hands,
kissing, having a good time with each other. They go into a
store to shop and camera pans to Lisa who has noticed Jess
before Jess noticed her. James is in the Mens section so
Lisa does not see him yet. |
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LISA
(sneaks up behind
Jess)
HEY! |
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Jess is looking through the clothes and jumps from Lisa
scaring her. |
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JESSAME
(gasps, then
chuckles)
Ahh!...(looks and see its Lisa)
Lisa!
(hits her)
you scared the shit out of me! |
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LISA
(laughs)
What are you doing here? |
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27.
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JESSAME
(kind of nervous,
with her eyes
looks for James)
Um, nothing just shopping and
having some me time. |
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LISA
Well, do you want to go have
lunch? |
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As Jessame tries to come up with an excuse not to go to
lunch, James comes up from behind and hugs her. Jessame has
a shocked looked on her face because she hasn't told Lisa
about James. |
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| |
LISA
(surprised, smiles)
Well, who's this Jess? |
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JAMES
(Shakes Lisa's
hand)
Hey I'm James. |
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JESSAME
Lisa, James, James, Lisa. Now we
all know each other....
(hinting to drop
the subject)
Ok Lisa?.... |
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LISA
(chuckles,grins)
Oh you know I'm not going to drop
this.
(looks at James,
smiles)
So James, Since I am the loving
caring friend I get to ask a
couple of questions. |
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JAMES
(Smiles)
perfectly understandable, ask
away. |
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| |
LISA
(counts fingers)
one, what's your occupation? two,
who do you live with? |
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28.
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JESSAME
(looks at lisa in
amazement over
dumb questions)
(scoffs) really Lisa?...wow. |
|
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|
| |
JAMES
(smiles, going
along with it)
One, I'm a Junior Architect. Two,
I live by myself (smiles). |
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| |
JESSAME
Are you happy now? |
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| |
LISA
(trying to size
James up)
for now.. |
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| |
JESSAME
(in a rush)
Ok...so I will see you later and
James and I are going to go now. |
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|
Jess grabs James arms and walks out the store and hurries to
get into the car. Camera watches Car leave parking lot. |
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| |
|
INT. SNAPPED - AFTERNOON |
|
|
It's the morning after and Jessame heads to her meeting she
has with her potential investors for her art gallery. She is
very excited because she knows in her heart they will give
her the contract to sign the deal and to get her gallery
fully running and ready to go.
She arrives to restaurant/cafe they agreed on meeting at.
They shake hands and sit down. |
|
|
| |
INVESTOR #1
Glad you could meet with us this
afternoon Ms. Smith. We've looked
over your business plan and it is
impressive.
The location, is a great space,
your projected earnings and
clientele that is already
available to you is a great start. |
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|
29.
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| |
INVESTOR #2
Unfortunately, the art market is
not doing as well as we had
thought it was, and therefore
cannot proceed further into this
venture with you.
You don't have to reimburse us the
money we gave to you,consider it a
donation from a couple of
supporters. |
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|
Jessame is in awe. She spaces out and tunes them out,
muffled sounds in background. |
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|
| |
INVESTOR #1
Ms. Smith?... Are you OK? |
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| |
JESSAME
(Snaps out of it)
Huh?...um..yeah. Excuse me, I have
to go.
(Shakes investors'
hand)
Thank you for your time. |
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|
|
Jessame gets into her car and starts to drive back to her
house, forgetting she needed to return to work. She is very
mad and upset. She pulls over to the side of the road and
parks.
Deep breaths. Inhale. Exhale. She hits the steering wheel
repeatedly having the horn go off a few times. She composes
herself and camera shows her driving off. She gets back to
her place, takes her shoes off and relaxes.
She goes into her room looking for her cutting kit she use
to have when she was with David. She places it on the bed,
goes to the kitchen grabs her whiskey and heads back to the
room.
She sits on the bed and lays everything out. She gets her
favorite cutting tool and starts to cut herself on the
inside of her thigh going deeper each time. On the fourth
cut she stops and watches the blood flow down her leg and
feels the pain and relief from all the bad things that
happened today.
She takes a swig of the alcohol and takes a pill. She lays
down and stares at the ceiling.
Camera is pan down facing her zooming in. She smirks. |
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30.
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INT. MY BLOOD IS YOUR BLOOD-FLASHBACK - NIGHT |
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You see David with a razor in his hand and Jessame looking
at him with love. David and Jess are laying in the bed and
David is analyzing her body, camera pans down Jessame's body
from head to toe. Showing the cuts that she has done to
herself and cuts David has done to her on her back. |
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Jessame sits up on the bed and David does as well. They are
high on pills. |
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DAVID
Why do you let me do this to you? |
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JESSAME
(laughs)
I like seeing blood and turns me
on.
(smiles)
You should try it. |
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|
Jessame grabs the razor and hands it to David. He cuts his
arms a few times.David tries his best not to show her that
he is in pain. Jess is turned on that he actually cut
himself and shows her that he actually wants to be with her
and and be in her world.
She stops him. |
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JESSAME
(reaches for
David's hand,
softly speaks)
Cut me. |
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David cuts her on her arm. She then grabs his arm and wipes
her finger on his blood and mixes their blood together on
hers. She then looks at him and licks her finger. She leans
in and kisses him. David grabs her hair tight and they begin
to have sex.
Camera pans off to bedroom door. Screen goes black. |
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31.
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INT. LOVELY - EVENING |
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AT THE BAR |
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Jessame is at the bar and is drinking. She is looking around
observing the patrons drinking and conversing; having a good
time. She notices a handsome business type guy staring at
her.
(pan to other side of bar)
He gets up and goes over to Jessame. Jessame acts like she
is not impressed and doesn't notice him. Continues to drink. |
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| |
EVAN
(smooth)
How are you? I'm Evan. |
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| |
JESSAME
(turns to Evan)
Hi Evan (turns back around
slowly). |
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| |
EVAN
(leans in a little
bit)
and you are?... |
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JESSAME
(gives a fake
smile)
Jessame. |
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| |
EVAN
(still being a
gentleman and
smooth)
Well Jessame, I see you're almost
done with your beverage and if it
isn't an issue, I'd like to buy
you another drink, sit down and
chat some more with you.
(smiles)
you seem like a very interesting
person. |
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| |
JESSAME
(looks at Evan and
smiles, shrugs
shoulders)
Sure.. why not.
(finishes drink)
no harm in a drink right? |
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|
32.
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EVAN
(Smiles)
Not at all.
(pauses)
So why are you out by yourself
tonight? |
|
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| |
JESSAME
(smiles, sarcastic
tone)
Well Evan, sometimes when you have
a shitty day, you have a few
drinks alone. |
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| |
EVAN
(smirks)
OK...
(leans towards
Jessame, whispers
in ear)
but you know you're not alone
right?
(smiles, winks) |
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| |
JESSAME
(smiles)
I know...So what about you? |
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| |
EVAN
Crunching numbers all day drives
you crazy sometimes. |
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| |
JESSAME
I bet it does...Listen I would
really like to change my clothes
and get out of here so...
(writes address on
napkin, hands to
Evan)
stop by my place, we'll have a few
drinks there and see what happens.
(leans in, looks
in his eyes)
So I'll see you soon? |
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| |
EVAN
(speechless)
Uh yeah...I'll see you in a bit. |
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|
33.
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| |
JESSAME
(still close to
him)
Good (gives him a kiss, sexy and
sultry). |
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|
Jessame walks out of bar very sexy and seductive. |
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| |
EVAN
(in awe, amazed by
her)
Bye
(smiles) |
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|
INT. LOVELY - LATER |
|
|
|
INT-JESSAME'S HOME- EVENING |
|
|
Jessame gets home to shower and change her clothes.
The phone rings, she answers it. |
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| |
JESSAME
Hello...Hey. OK I'll see you in 30
minutes. Bye. |
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|
There's a knock on the door. She opens the door and it's
Evan. She lets him in and looks outside real quick and comes
back in. |
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| |
JESSAME
(leans in and
kisses him)
Hi. Come in and make yourself at
home. I'll make us some drinks. |
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|
Evan sits down and Jess gets the bottle of Whiskey, grabs
two cups and pours herself and Evan a drink. She then grabs
a little bottle out of the cabinet and ours some into Evan's
drink.
She Stirs it a little and then grabs the cups and heads to
the couch. Jess then hands Evan the cup with the drugs in
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34.
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it. She watches him drink a little bit and then she drinks.
A few drinks later, Jessame looks at Evan (they are both
drunk, but Jess is the one with the upper hand), and smiles.
Evan smiles back. |
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| |
JESSAME
You have the bluest eyes I have
ever seen. They're so pretty. I
want them (laughs). |
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|
Jessame smiles back at Evan, gets up and heads to her room.
She changes into a sexy lingerie outfit and she takes a
couple of pills.
Evan is wondering where she went. She comes back moments
later in the lingerie outfit. |
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JESSAME
(smiles)
Are you coming to bed or no?...If
not, you can show yourself out and
have a good night. |
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|
Jessame goes back to her room. Evan gets up and goes to
Jessame's room. Evan Closes the door and Jessame is standing
there sexy. She walks up to him, pushes him against the door
and kisses him. She takes his shirt off and kisses him
again.
Evan and Jess head towards the bed and lay down. They are
making out and Jessame looks into Evan's eyes. |
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JESSAME
(seductively)
I swear I love your eyes. I could
stare at them all night. |
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EVAN
(kisses Jess)
Well maybe we can arrange
something later. |
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|
Jess Smiles. She gets on top of Evan and kisses his chest
and bites him a little and works her way down. She undoes
his pants and comes back up. She puts her hand underneath
the pillow. Evans eyes are closed the whole time, enjoying
himself.
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She continues to kiss and bite in different areas and as she
does this she slowly removes her small knife from under the
pillow. She then slowly works her way to his throat and she
presses the knife against him.
Evan opens his eyes. |
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JESSAME
I'm sorry, I really want your
eyes. |
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Jessame slits his throat as he tries to get up. Evan Grabs
his throat and Jessame gets off of him and watches him try
to get up and leave her room. Evan gasps for air each
breath. Jessame just watches. Calm.
Evan finally dies and she get up off the bed and lays Evan
flat on the floor and begins to cut his eyes out. She gags a
little bit while doing it, since this is the first she's
ever done anything like this. After she gets the eyes out
she puts them on her dresser. Jess is covered in blood. She
looks at her bed and its covered in blood.
She is too high to even care and the adrenaline is so much
for her right now, that she passes out on the bed. |
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INT. LOVELY - MORNING |
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It's the next morning and camera pans from Jessames feet to
her face, showing the dries up blood on her and the bloody
sheets. Camera shows Evan's lifeless body is still on the
floor.
Jess Wakes up, rubs her face and scratches her head. Jess is
kind of hung over and still tired so her eyes are still kind
of shut and she's a little grumpy. She looks at the body,
gets up and drags him to the bathroom. She puts him in the
tub and heads to the garage. She goes into the garage and
goes into her cabinet that has chemicals in it and she grabs
the lye container.
She goes back into the house, goes to the bathroom and pours
the lye all over his body. She closes the curtains on tub
and closes bathroom door and leaves the body. She goes to
the kitchen and washes her face and gets a cloth and wipes
herself down to remove most of the blood on her.
She goes back to her room, gets sheets off her bed and puts
them in garbage bags. She then gets dressed, goes to the
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living room and spends the rest of the day relaxing. Camera
shows Jessame smoking and watching TV. Jess falls asleep on
the couch and hours later shows her waking up.
She heads to the bathroom where she left Evan and sees bones
and bloody mush inside the tub. She goes into the kitchen to
grab more bags and grab gloves. She picks up all the bloody
mush that didn't go down the drain and puts it in the bag.
She ties it up and then begins to put his bones in a bag
too. She goes outside to throw the bags away in trashcan.
She goes back inside to clean up the tub. After she
finishes. SHe cleans herself up again, washes her clothes,
grabs a drink out the fridge and sits down on the couch.
Camera is focused on Jess and zooms out. |
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INT. THE MOMENT THINGS WILL CHANGE - DAY |
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Camera is in front of Jessame showing her sitting behind her
desk.
She looks like she has a massive hangover, she's tired and
emotionally drained.
Lisa walks into her office. |
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LISA
(knocks on door)
Knock knock...I just wanted to
tell you that I gave corporate my
two weeks, so it's official
(smiles). |
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JESSAME
That's good. couple more weeks and
you'll be out of this hell hole
and start a new life. I'm happy
for you. |
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LISA
Oh! so... how'd the meeting go? |
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JESSAME
(iritated)
oh I didn't tell you? They didn't
want to go through with it, oh but
the advancement that was given to
me I can keep as a "donation". |
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LISA
I'm sorry Jess. I know this is
hard for you. |
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JESSAME
Everything that I had going for me
was riding on this gallery.
Everything for me to start fresh. |
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LISA
(walks towards
Jess)
You'll be fine, you have this job. |
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JESSAME
(scuffs)
This job is a joke.
(serious)
I have some stuff I still gotta
finish up before deadline, so I'll
meet up with you later. ok? |
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LISA
Ok...
(walks toward door
and turns around)
Hey Jess... |
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JESSAME
(looks up from
computer)
Yeah.... |
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LISA
You've had a rough few weeks. Why
don't you take a few days off and
I'll cover for you. I'll tell
corporate you're sick or
something.
Get some rest, you need it (closes
door). |
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Camera is facing Jessame while she is sleeping. She opens
her eyes, turns over and there's James next to her sleeping.
She moves closer to him and lays her head on his chest and
he adjusts his body to be closer to hers and wraps his arm
around her. Camera still focuses on Jessame.
You can see she is thinking about something and that its
bothering, but she says nothing.
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Screen goes black. |
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INT. THE NIGHT'S STILL YOUNG - EVENING |
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A few days have past and Jessame's nose no longer looks
bruised or has a splint on it. She was moping around her
house the last few days and had James over a few times to
comfort her. She decides she wants to get some fresh air and
goes for a jog, but is still upset about the gallery and
Lisa leaving her.
So as she is jogging she happens to notice a lady running by
herself. Her hand balls up in a fist and contemplates
whether or not she should do something to let out her
frustration. She unfist her hand, sighs and runs past her. |
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JESSAME
(runs past looks
at her)
Evening. |
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Jessame runs down path and camera focuses on runner that she
past. Then the Jogger hears a branch snap, she looks into
the woods. She doesn't hear. So she goes into the woods to
see if someone is in there. She walks into the dark and then
Jessame comes from behind and hits her with a rock knocking
her out. |
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INT. THE NIGHT'S STILL YOUNG - LATER |
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Camera pans to the jogger tied up and head bleeding from
being hit. She starts to come to. Jessame is sitting in
front of her from a distance just watching her. She has a
mask on to hide her face because she still isn't sure if she
wants to kill her or not.
Her anger is building up more and more every time she thinks
about what the investors say and hearing Lisa telling her
the news of her move. She stands up and walks up to the
jogger and sits on the floor in front of her not saying
anything. Just staring.
The jogger is crying. She notices knife in Jessame's hand. |
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JOGGER
Please...Don't kill me... |
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Jessame just stares at her and tilts her head. |
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INT. YOU'RE MINE-FLASHBACK - AFTERNOON |
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You hear Jessame getting slapped and then you see David
Pushing her into the wall with anger and jealousy in his
eyes. Jessame is angry and confused. |
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DAVID
(furious)
WHO THE FUCK WAS HE!?!?
(slams her head
into wall)
HUH? YOU FUCKING CHEATING ON ME? |
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JESSAME
(holding head)
NO! I SWEAR! HE'S JUST A GUY FROM
WORK.! |
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DAVID
(choking her,
points finger)
ROB SAID HE FUCKING SAW YOU GUYS
TOGETHER! |
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JESSAME
(angry)
WELL ROB'S A FUCKING LIAR!!! I
LOVE YOU!!! |
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DAVID
(lets her go)
Then prove it... |
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Jessame grabs David's hand and takes him into the bedroom.
She turns around and slaps him. He chokes her again and
brings her in close and kisses her. |
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INT. THE NIGHT'S STILL YOUNG - CONTINUOUS |
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JOGGER
(sobbing)
NO! PLEASE....DON'T!!!! (trying to
get out of chair) DON'T!!!! |
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Jessame pulls mask off and throws it on floor. Pulls joggers
hair hard and wraps it around her hand. and slowly sticks
knife into joggers throat. The blood spurts and oozes onto
Jessames hand.
She takes it out and then proceeds to slit her throat left
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to right with strong force the blood pours out. She stands
in front of jogger, sits down and watches the blood pour out
of this woman and her life disappearing.
Once woman is completely dead, Jessame sighs with boredom
like it wasn't as fulfilling as she thought it would be. Her
nose itches so she scratches it. She gets up and unties the
jogger. She leaves for just a moment to go grab the axe.
She pushes body onto ground, positions her and then raises
the axe to get ready to chop her up in pieces and clean up. |
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INT. IN THESE HARD TIMES - MORNING |
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Jessame walks into work and Lisa is in her office with Mr.
Bailey and Julie. Lisa sees her and walks up to her with
concern. Jessame is getting nervous. |
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LISA
(stops Jessame)
Don't flip out OK? |
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JESSAME
(chuckles)
Flip out about what? Why is she in
my office and who else is in
there? |
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Jessame looks at Lisa and gets mad, she pushes her out of
the way and walks into her office and shuts the door.
Camera pans to Lisa who looks worried.
Moments later Jess opens the door and walks out. |
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LISA
Jess what's wrong, what happen? |
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JESSAME
(keeps walking,
looked pissed)
Get my stuff for me will ya.? |
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Lisa looks back in the office. Julie is standing in front of
the door smiling. |
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INT. IN THESE HARD TIMES - AFTERNOON |
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CUE JESS AT HOME
WITH JAMES |
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Jessame takes joint out of her hand and passes it to James,
she blows out the smoke. |
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JAMES
So you're off early. |
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JESSAME
(looks at James)
I don't want to talk about it.
Change the subject. |
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JAMES
OK...
(pauses and
thinks, look at
Jess)
Are you ever going to tell me
about your scars?...I've been
wanting to ask for awhile. |
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JESSAME
(shakes head,
takes deep breath)
Some are from me...I use to cut
myself...and the others are from
someone who I will never see
again. |
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JESSAME
How bout we stop talking and just
enjoy this day relaxing and
drinking...
(closes eyes,
tilts head back,
deep sigh) |
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They continue to smoke. Jess gets up to get them some
drinks, she sits back down. |
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JESSAME
(takes a sip,
quite for a min
then speaks)
(MORE)
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JESSAME (cont'd)
You know Lisa is leaving me?
(upset)
You know the two of us were as
thick as thieves. Then everything
changed after... |
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JESSAME
(shakes head)
nothing...things just changed. |
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James moves closer to Jess to console her. |
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JAMES
You have me, and I know you are
strong enough to do whatever you
put your mind to. |
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Camera pans on Jessame thinking. Calm, relax. Camera slowly
zooms out to fully show her and James on couch. |
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Days have past and Jess takes the time to reflect and plan
on what she is going to do with her life. She walks
downtown, at the park, she jogs and every now and then Lisa
will call, but Jess never answers. Jess feels like she needs
to slowly shut Lisa out in order to move on and not feel the
hurt that she feels by this move and her losing her job. |
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EXT. WANDERING EYE - EVENING |
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(No talking just background music)
As Lisa is enjoying her night with a friend, she happens to
see James across the street with another girl. The camera
pans to James and the girl and they look like they are
flirting. A few moments pass and lisa hides her face a
little but still watching them.
James and the girl are by his car talking and James opens
the door for her and she gets in. He closes her door and
then he gets in the car as well and they drive off. Lisa
looks mad because she knew something was wrong about him the
day she met him, but she didn't want to upset Jessame. She
then tells friend that she is going to leave and will call
them. The camera follows Lisa to her car and she gets in and
drives off. |
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INT. WANDERING EYE - MOMENTS LATER |
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Camera is on Jessame and following her as she gets dressed.
Jessame is wearing just a bra and underwear and her hair is
in curlers. She's doing her makeup trying to hurry and
finish before James comes. She then stops doing her makeup
and puts on her pencil skirt. She then returns back to her
mirror and finishes her right eye and starts to take the
curlers out.
As she is taking the curlers out, there's a knock on the
door. Jessame jumps a little because she wasn't expecting
anyone right now. She assumes its James, so she freaks out a
little. There's another knock on the door. Jessame gets up
and opens door and sees its Lisa and has a relieved look on
her face. |
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JESSAME
(opens door and
she's Lisa,
relieved)
You fuckin scared me I thought you
were James. |
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LISA
(walks in house)
Why what happen? You ok? |
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JESSAME
Yeah I'm fine. We're suppose to go
out tonight and I'm not even close
to being ready yet. |
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Jessame heads back to her room to finish getting ready and
Lisa follows. |
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LISA
(hesitant but
serious)
Oh (pauses. Hey...I have to tell
you something. |
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JESSAME
(Taking curlers
out her hair)
What? |
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LISA
I saw something not too long ago
and I had to come over here and
tell you myself. |
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JESSAME
(shaping hair)
Ok... what is it? |
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LISA
(Takes deep
breath, exhales)
I saw James downtown with another
woman tonight and they drove off
in his car. |
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Jessame stops doing her hair. She's quiet and Lisa is quiet,
but nervous because she thinks Jess is going to flip out on
her for accusing James for being with another woman. |
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JESSAME
(confused)
You what? |
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Lisa Nods her head. The camera goes to Jessame who looks
bummed out, but tries not to show that she's hurt at the
fact that James might be cheating on her. |
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There's a knock on the door and Jessame gets up to open it.
Lisa follows her to the door. Jessame opens the door and
it's James. Jessame looks at James with hurt and anger. Lisa
looks at him in disgust and walks out. |
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LISA
I'll talk to you later. |
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James looks back at Lisa with a smile, but then a confused
look because he doesn't understand why they are both giving
him mean looks. Lisa leaves and Jessame lets James inside
the house. She closes the door and James turns around and
looks at her and she stares him down.
She moves closer to him and crosses her arms and stares with
disappointment. |
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JESSAME
(Straight to the
point)
Are you cheating on me? |
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Jessame puts head down and doesn't look at him. James grabs
her face gently and looks in her eyes. |
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45.
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JESSAME
(pouting look)
Lisa said she saw with another
girl tonight, that you guys drove
off together. |
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JAMES
And you believe her? You really
think I'm cheating on you? |
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Jessame slaps him and James grabs her arms real tight. Jess
is shocked that he grabbed her but shows no fear towards
him. James realizes that he's grabbing her hard and loosens
his grip. He brings her in closer. |
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JAMES
(softly grabs
face, close to
Jessame, about to
kiss)
Listen and hear me. I love you,
and I would never cheat on you.
(kisses her)
Never. |
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James Passionately kisses Jessame. He pushes her up against
the wall and the start kissing again. Jessame takes her
skirt off and James takes his shirt off and they both head
to the bedroom. They close the door and the screen goes
black. |
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EXT. DETACHMENT - DAY |
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It's the next morning and James gets up out of Jessame's bed
and quietly gets dressed and leaves. Camera follows him into
his car and back to his place. He gets inside and puts his
keys on the table. He gets undressed and gets in the shower.
He cleans up, gets out and brushes teeth, does his hair and
gets dressed.
He then heads to the door, grabs his keys and heads out the
door. Camera follows him to car and follows him driving
around. He then finds a place to park and turns the car off.
He grabs his phone and calls Jessame. Camera is on James
throughout the whole conversation.
The phone rings. |
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JESSAME
(O.S., answers
phone)
Hey...I missed you this morning. |
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JAMES
I didn't want to wake you. Had to
take a shower and change.
(pauses)
So I was thinking that we go grab
a bite to eat right now? |
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JESSAME
(winces)
We're actually eating right now at
the restaurant I was telling you
about...Maybe tonight we can do
something yeah? |
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JAMES
Um yeah. yeah that will work. See
you tonight. |
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The both hang up and then James turns on his car back on and
drives off. Camera transitions into new scene with James
arriving to the restaurant that Jessame said they were at.
He just sits and waits. Moments pass and James finally sees
Lisa and Jessame coming out of the restaurant.
The camera follows Jessame to her car. Lisa gives Jess a hug
and heads to her car and Jess leaves the parking lot. The
camera pans back to James who is getting out of the car and
heading across the street to talk to Lisa. Camera pans back
to Lisa who is about to drive off.
James runs up to her car and taps window kind of hard.
Camera turns to Lisa. Lisa is startled and looks and notices
it James. She then rolls her window down and turns down the
radio. |
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LISA
Jesus James you scared me. |
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JAMES
Sorry. Wasn't trying to. |
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LISA
What are you doing here? Jess left
already. |
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47.
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JAMES
Oh I know, I actually wanted to
see you. I need to talk to you
about something. |
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LISA
(looks like she
know wheres he
headed)
Look I know it wasn't any of
business last night, but Jess is
my friend and I'm always looking
out for her. |
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JAMES
(Hangs on car
window)
And that's perfectly fine, if I
was doing something wrong, which I
wasn't.
(threatening)
But if you must know, that girl I
was with yesterday was my sister.
She was visiting from out of town
and I took her to her favorite
spot here in LA.
(kind of angry)
You of all people should be happy
for her.I love Jess and I would
never hurt her. |
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She looks at James with anger and concern. |
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LISA
You're right and I apologize for
assuming you were cheating on
Jess...Now I have to go. |
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Lisa rolls up her window and James backs up and lets Lisa
drive off. Camera shows Lisa driving off and James watching
her go. |
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INT. DEJA VU - AFTERNOON |
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Camera shows Jess laying on the couch and watching tv.
Moments pass as Jess reacts to the stuff happening on the
tv.
There's a knock on the door. |
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48.
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Jess gets up and runs to the door and opens it. It's Lisa.
Jess lets her in they both head to the couch. |
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LISA
What are you watching? |
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JESSAME
I dunno. Some show. |
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LISA
(Turns body
towards Jess)
Hey I need to talk to you about
something. |
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Jess sees that Lisa is serious and something is bothing her
so she turns the tv off and faces her. |
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JESSAME
What's wrong? Are you ok? |
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LISA
(Straight to the
point)
I don't think you should see James
anymore Jess. |
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JESSAME
(smiles and
chuckles)
What are you talking about? James
is a cool guy. |
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LISA
He's not a good person, I can feel
it. |
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JESSAME
(angry)
Are you serious. The one good
thing I have in my life that isn't
fucked up right now and you want
me to end it? |
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LISA
(in a pleading
way, grabs Jess
hands)
I'm not saying be by yourself. I'm
saying break up with James before
something happens. I feel like
(MORE)
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LISA (cont'd)
this us ten years ago Jess.
(pauses)
And I don't want that. |
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JESSAME
Well it's not going to happen.
When I need him, he's there. So be
happy for me.
(turns body back
to face tv, turns
tv back on)
I think you should go now. |
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Jessame doesn't look at Lisa. Lisa gets up and walks towards
the door. Just before she leaves she turns around and looks
at Jess like she's going to say something, but just closes
the door and leaves. |
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INT. BETTER OFF - EVENING |
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A week goes by and Jessame is at home spending time alone
with herself. She hears a knock on the door. |
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JESSAME
(turns down tv)
Who is it. |
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Jessame gets up to open door. |
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LISA
I've been trying to contact you
for days now. I was a little
worried. Everything alright? |
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JESSAME
(in between door,
not letting Lisa
in)
yeah just getting my head
together. |
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LISA
I wanted to apologize. |
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50.
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LISA
For not telling you about my
apprenticeship til the last minute
and that whole thing with James. |
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JESSAME
It's ok. I understand why you
waited to tell me and as far as
James you're just protecting me. |
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LISA
(changes subject)
So anyway, I came by to check on
you and to see if you wanted to go
jogging. It's really nice out. |
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JESSAME
(hesistant)
No, i'm ok. |
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JESSAME
Call me tomorrow if you want. |
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Lisa nods her head and right before Jessame gets ready to
shut her door she stops her. |
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LISA
Hey... I love you, you know that
right? |
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Jessame nods her head and shuts the door. Camera pans to
Lisa and follows her to car and is inside watching her drive
to Jogging spot. Lisa arrives, gets out of car and
stretches. She then begins to Jog.
Lisa is almost done with her Jog and headed by to her car
when she hears a branch break in the woods. She stops to see
if she can hear the sound again. Silence...then another
crack, Lisa starts to run fast to her car. She doesn't look
back. She struggles to get her keys out.
She finds the key, puts in the door and then someone comes
from behind and hits her across the head. She falls, she
screams, but no one is around to hear or help. He turns her
over, hits her over and over and over. Lisa is screaming for
help, calling for Jess.
The man stops hitting her and watches her crawl, she turns
around and sees the man, but can't see his face, she starts
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to cry realizing that the man is guy from the news.
Terrified, she tries with all her might to get away, she
stands up, but he kicks her back down. He hits a few more
times.
He grabs her head. Camera pans onto Lisa's face all bloody
and beaten. She looks at the killer. |
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The killer snaps her neck and lets go of her. He looks at
her and then looks around for a moment. Camera is fixed on
where killer was standing. Killer steps out of camera view
for a moment and comes back with a rock in his hand and
proceeds to bash her head in.
After he is finished he leans in and grabs the necklace that
is around her neck and puts it in his pocket. He then
proceeds to drag her in the woods (camera is back and forth
with the killer and Lisa's body as he drags her), and they
fade away into the dark. |
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INT. BETTER OFF-CONT. - MORNING |
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A couple of days past and Jessame is sleeping. Today is the
day before Lisa's departure.
There's a knock on the door kind of frantic, Jess slightly
moves. The knock gets louder and more frantic. |
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VICTOR
(MUFFLED, FRANTIC)
JESS!!! OPEN THE DOOR!!!! (KNOCKS
AGAIN) JESS!!! |
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JESSAME
Alright!!! HOLD ON!
(slowly gets out
of bed,wipes face)
fuck man, can't ever get any type
of sleep when I want it. |
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Jessame walks to the door and opens it. |
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JESSAME
Why the fuck are you banging on my
door so fucking hard? |
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52.
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Victor looks at her with concern and wondering how he's
going to tell Jess the bad news. Jess stares back at him,
seeing its hard for him to say what he has to say. |
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Camera pans to Victor. Victor puts his head down. |
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VICTOR
(serious, slowly
lefts head up)
they found Lisa's body in the
woods last night....They said
she's been there for a few days. |
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Jessame is in shock and doesn't speak. She just listens as
if she's spaced out. |
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JESSAME
(cuts him off,
tries to hold
back tears)
How'd she die? |
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VICTOR
(hesistant)
I don't think you want to- |
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JESSAME
(STERN, looks at
him seriously)
HOW VICTOR (still holding back
tears)? |
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VICTOR
(sighs)
They said he snapped her neck and
then bashed her head in with a
rock. |
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Jessame's sadness, quickly fills with anger. |
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JESSAME
(grabs head)
What the fuck is going on right
now?! |
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VICTOR
They called me after they tried to
call you. |
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53.
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Jessame can't accept the fact the Lisa's dead. As she she
leans on the door. She feels her world crumbling and fading.
Her life has exploded and she feels there's nothing more for
her. Her mind is racing and heart is beating fast not able
to handle the terrible news. The horrible end to a life that
had more potential than hers. |
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JESSAME
(looks at Victor,
disgusted with
herself)
Bye, Victor (Closes door). |
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A week goes by and Jessame's hope has went away ever since
the death of Lisa. She sees her life as a punishment now for
all the shit she's done. She takes drugs more often and
always seems to be high.
At night she cries and cuts herself, watching the blood
slowly drip from her. Leaving her body. Leaving her. Red
adding color to her world. The feeling that never could
escape her. That feeling of fulfillment only satisfied
momentarily with a cut along her skin, watching this pain
and hurt leave her.
But only for a moment. |
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INT. DEATH BECOMES HER - EVENING |
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Jessame is sitting on her couch enjoying her high and then
theres a knock on the door. |
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JULIE
(sympathetic voice)
It's Julie. I just wanted to say
that I'm sorry for your loss. Lisa
was a great person and I know you
guys were really close. |
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Jess starts to get mad, but calms herself down. She gets up
and goes to open door. |
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JESSAME
(looks depressed)
Do you wanna come in? I kinda
don't have anyone to talk to. |
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54.
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JULIE
(kind of hesistant)
Uh...sure. I'll come in. |
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Jessame lets her in and closes and locks the door. |
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JESSAME
You want a drink.? |
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JESSAME
Go ahead and have a seat. |
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Julie sits down and Jessame makes Julie a drink. She
finishes and hands it to her. Jess watches her drink it,
once she takes the first sip, she drinks hers.
A few drinks later...
Jessame makes one more drink for Julie and watches her drink
it. Julie is drunk and wants to confess to Jess about
something. |
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JULIE
(drunk)
Jess, I'm really sorry. I was
angry that you got the position
over me- |
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Jessame just looks at her and then smiles. |
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JESSAME
(cuts her off)
It's ok, I understand. Don't worry
about it. |
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JULIE
(Drowsy)
I know, but I just....
(starting to pass
out)
feel...(feels head) bad.... |
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JESSAME
(pretending to be
concerned)
Are you ok? |
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JULIE
(slowly losing
consciousness)
yeah...I..
(MORE)
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55.
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JULIE (cont'd)
feel...dizzy...What...did..you...- |
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Julie passes out and Jessame smiles and looks at her. She
then drags her outside and puts her in the trunk. She gets
her stuff and gets into car and goes to the gallery.
Jessame finally arrives, looks around for people and then
gets Julie out of trunk. Julie is still unconscious. Jessame
gets her out and takes her inside. Jessame ties her up and
tapes her mouth and waits. |
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Julie starts to come to and adjusts eyes so she can see.She
notices someone sitting in front of her with a bloody white
mask. She then notices she is tied up and tries to get out,
nothing work so she starts to panic. Struggling, becoming
more frantic.
Jessame gets up and takes mask off. Julie is terrified. |
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JESSAME
(leans in)
You scream, I fucking cut your
tongue out. Understand? |
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Julie nods her head in agreement and Jessame pulls off tape
and stares at her with rage. |
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JULIE
(scared)
Are...are you going to kill me? |
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JESSAME
I'm going to torture you first and
then I'm going to kill you
(smiles). |
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As Jessame is talking she goes and retrieves her "tools" she
picked out for this special occasion. She walks back and
lays them on a portable table she has placed nearby in view
for Julie to see.
She opens up the bag and grabs the rose trimmers from the
bag. She walks up to Julie. |
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JESSAME
Now Julie, I don't know if you
realized it or not
(grabs face)
but I'm not the person you want to
fuck with. (lets go with force) |
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56.
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JULIE
(cries,pleads)
Please don't kill me. Please! |
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JESSAME
(looks at hand and
picks a finger)
Now, I want you to know that this
might hurt (smirks and cuts her
finger off). |
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Julie screams in pain begging for her to stop. Jessame cuts
off another finger and watched the blood pour out of them.
She cups her hand and catches the blood falling and switches
the blood from left to right letting a little fall to the
ground each time. She feels the blood on her hands. Smooth,
warm and looks beautiful, calm.
Julie is in tremendous pain, crying, pleading. |
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Jessame remembers she forgot something in her car, so she
goes to get it. |
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JULIE
(crying, tilts
head back)
Where are you going?! Please...let
me go!!! |
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Jessame comes back, camera pans low to ground. Your hear
nothing but the scraping of metal and the footsteps of
Jessame coming closer and closer. You can hear Julie's
breathing becoming deeper and deeper each time becoming more
faster. Jessame can feel her fear, she can smell it. Jess
becomes excited and finally makes it to the chair. She
stands in front of Julie. |
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JULIE
(notices axe,
sighs deep and
pleads)
Please don't do this...
(sobs)
please...I'm sorry... |
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JULIE
(crying softly)
No...please don't. |
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57.
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JESSAME
(sighs deep,
irritated)
Alright, I'll choose. |
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Jessame pulls axe back and cuts right into her right leg,
under the knee. Julie screams in agony. Then Jess does the
other leg. She drops axe and watches Julie scream in agony.
Then Jessame grabs a knife from the table and grabs Julies
hair and wraps it around her hand. She then pushes the knife
slowly in her face and pushes deeper and deeper cutting
around her face. Julie screams as she is cutting in her
face. Jessame stops and starts to peel her face off. Julie
screams even more and then silence.
Jessame still continues to peel skin off slowly and finally
finishes. She walks in front of Julie's body holding her
face and she puts it on rubbing it on her face and then she
stops and lets the face hit the ground. She looks at the
mess she's made, but feels relieved. She looks around and
thinking about how she's going to clean the mess.
She then looks at Julie's body again, walks up to her
lifeless body and gets close to her face. Camera pans in on
Julie's ear and Jessame's lips. |
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JESSAME
(whispers)
I forgive you. |
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Screen goes black. |
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A few days go by and Jessame goes on a killing spree.
There's a killing montage of the 4 people she killed after
Julie's death. The montage shows how she catches each one
and how she tortures and kills them (Just intense scary
background music and screaming from the victims is going on
in montage) |
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INT. PERSISTANT - MORNING |
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A couple days go by since Julie's death and the phone rings.
Jessame is startled, but reaches for the phone. She answers
it. |
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58.
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JAMES
(O.S.)
Hey it's me. Did I wake you? |
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JESSAME
(rubbing eyes)
No, what's wrong? |
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JAMES
Nothing ,I just wanted to make
sure you were OK. |
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JESSAME
Yeah I'm fine. Is that all you
wanted? |
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JAMES
(pauses)
I want to take you out and have a
good night... Like before all this
shit happened. |
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JAMES
OK. I'll pick you up later. |
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Jessame hangs up the phone and turns over to the other side
of the bed and pulls covers over her head. |
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INT. PERSISTANT - LATER |
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Camera is focused on Jessame sleeping. You can't see her,
she is under the covers. You hear a loud banging on the
door,"boom boom boom". There's a pause and then another loud
bang, "boom boom boom". Jessame rolls on her back and takes
covers off of her.
Banging continues. |
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JESSAME
(yells)
I'M COMING ALREADY! |
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Jessame gets out of bed and heads to the door and opens it. |
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59.
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JESSAME
(looks pissed and
irritated)
What...the fuck. |
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VICTOR
(concerned)
Have you seen Julie? She hasn't
been at work and hasn't been
answering her phone. |
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JESSAME
(gets more mad)
Why the fuck would I know where
she's at? |
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Jessame gets ready to slam door in his face, but Victor
stops her. |
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VICTOR
(puts foot in
door.)
She told me she was headed to your
house and she would call me when
she left, but she never called. |
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JESSAME
(opens door a
little, looks
furious)
So what are you trying to say? |
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VICTOR
(Stutters a little)
I'm..I'm just saying that, she
said she would call and she
didn't...that's all. |
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JESSAME
(irritated)
Well what the fuck does that have
to do with me? |
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Jessame gets ready to close the door, but before she does
she tells Victor something. |
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JESSAME
(attitude)
Call the cops, that's their
fucking job. |
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60.
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INT. A FEW QUESTIONS - MORNING |
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It's the day after Victor comes by Jess's house. Jess is
sleeping. She turns over and stretches. She then begins to
wake up. She gets out of the bed and puts her pants and
shirt on. She then goes to the kitchen and makes herself a
bowl of cereal. She sits down on the couch and turns the tv
on.
Camera is focused on Jessame eating her cereal when there's
a knock on the door. Jessame is annoyed that she is being
interrupted eating her cereal, but gets up with the bowl in
her hand and opens the door. It's Victor and a detective. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Are you Jessame Smith? |
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JESSAME
Yes...what can I do for you? |
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Victor looks at her like she's a piece of work and slightly
nods head. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
I'm Detective Russo and I hate to
disturb you this morning, but it
was brought to my attention that
there's a woman by the name of
Julie Delgado missing and I'd like
to ask you a few questions. |
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Jess looks shocked and shakes head. |
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JESSAME
What?...oh my god, yeah yes
whatever you need. I don't know if
I'll know much, but I'll
try...please come in. |
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Jess steps back and opens door more for cops and victor to
come in detective comes in and then Victor comes in. As
Victor comes in he stares Jessame down with a clever smirk
as if he has got her. Jess stares back with an angry smirk
trying to hide the rage she has for him.
The detective turns around and Jess changes her facial
expression to be as pleasant and calm as she can. She looks
at the detective. |
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JESSAME
Could I get you something to
drink? Water, soda, juice, coffee? |
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61.
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Yes. I'll take some coffee.
Thanks. |
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JESSAME
(with an attitude,
anger in eyes)
Victor...you want anything? |
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VICTOR
(with an
attitude,half
smirk)
No. I'm good. |
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JESSAME
(looks at
detective)
I will be right back (smiles). |
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The detective and Victor go sit on the couch and Jessame
goes into the kitchen. As she walks in she queitly flips out
in anger. Quietly screaming and throwing her arms in
punching motions and then she begins punching herself in the
face. Her rage consumes her. After her fit she collect
herself, pours the detective a cup of coffee, takes a deep
breath and walks back to the foyer. |
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JESSAME
(hands detective
coffee)
Here you go. |
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Jessame sits down on another couch and faces them. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
(takes sip of
coffee)
So Ms. Smith, there are a few
questions I wanted to ask about
the disappearance of Julie Delgado
and they are your typical standard
questions we have to ask. Is that
ok? |
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JESSAME
Yeah, like I said I will help as
best I can, but I doubt I know
anything. |
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62.
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
(takes notepad
out, starts
writing jess's
answers down)
Where were you three days ago? |
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JESSAME
Here at my house. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Can anyone confirm this? |
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JESSAME
yeah, my boyfriend.
(looks at Victor,
evil smirk)
He was with me all night. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
And his name? |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Ok...did you know Julie well?
Would she just disappear without
telling anyone? |
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JESSAME
I only worked with her. I never
hung out with her outside of work
so I wouldn't know. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Did she ever mention going
anywhere? Maybe through a casual
conversation? |
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JESSAME
I never talked to her on a casual
type situation. It was all
work...sorry. |
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VICTOR
(getting upset,
butts in)
Did you know that Julie got her
fired and took her job? Remember
that Jess? |
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63.
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
(looks interested)
Did she now? How did that make you
feel? |
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JESSAME
Like any normal person, upset.
(starts to get mad)
I don't understand what this has
to do with anything. Besides, I'm
opening up my own gallery in a few
months, so I was going to quit
anyways. |
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The detective closes his notepad and stands up. Jess and
Victor also stand up. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Well...Thanks for answering my
questions and if I have anything
else I'll give you a call. |
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VICTOR
(upset,in
disbelief)
What?...That's it? You're not
going to arrest her? She did
something to Julie, I know it! |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
(Stern, direct)
Mr. Jimenez you need to calm down.
Now it seems like you're harassing
this lady and from what it looks
like you seem to have some sort of
grudge against her.
Now if you want I can arrest you
for harassment. |
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Victor looks at Jess with anger and Jess looks back at him
with a devilish grin. |
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Victor leaves and the detective heads towards the door with
Jess. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
(hands business
card to Jess)
Sorry about all this. If he comes
back over here, you give me a call
(MORE)
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64.
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DETECTIVE RUSSO (cont'd)
ok? |
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JESSAME
It's ok. He's worried about Julie.
He's a good friend. |
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DETECTIVE RUSSO
Well, you have a good rest of your
day. |
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The detective leaves and Jessame closes the door.Camera
focuses on Jess. She turns around and puts her body against
the door. She tilts her head back and takes a deep breath,
thinking about what just happened and what she's going to
have to do to correct the problem (Victor). She pushes off
the door and heads to the kitchen.
The screen goes black. |
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|
A few weeks go by and Jess has been spying on Victor ever
since he brought the detective over. She starts to get
frustrated as there is never a good time for her to make her
move on killing him. One night she happens to remember about
the exhibition that they throw every year and that would be
the perfect time to grab him.
The night of the exhibition comes and Victor is mingling
with the clients and doing his job. Once the exhibition is
over, Victor leaves and heads for his car. Victor gets in
and puts the key in the ignition, Jessame peeks from behind
the driver seat and Victor sees her in mirror and gets ready
to turn, but she gets him with a cloth and puts it over his
nose and he passes out.
Jess gets out of the back seat and opens the driver door.
She then pulls him out and puts him in the backseat, closes
the door and she gets in the driver seat, closes her door
and drives off. |
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INT. COMING TO AN END - EVENING |
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After arriving to her kill spot, Jess gets out of the car
and pulls Victor out (who is still unconscious). Shem drags
him inside and ties him up to a pulley and lifts him so he
is hanging form his hands.
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65.
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She patiently waits for him to wake up.
Finally Victor comes to and he starts to panic. |
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VICTOR
(trying to break
free)
WHAT THE FUCK?!
(Trying to shake
loose)
WHAT IS THIS? LET ME GO.! YOU
FUCKING BITCH! |
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Jess walks closer to him and he notices she has a bat in her
hand. She just looks at him and smiles. She steps back a
little bit and swings the bat right into his stomach. Victor
coughs and yells in pain. She does it again, but harder this
time. Then again. |
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| |
VICTOR
(coughing, crying)
please stop. please. im sorry. im
sorry (puts head down). |
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JESSAME
(lifts Victor's
head up)
But I haven't even started the
best part yet. |
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Jessame drops the bat and goes and finds her tools. As she
does this the camera is focused on Victor who is still
trying to get free despite the pain he is in. She comes back
and has a small knife in her hand and a stool. She props the
stool next to him and grabs his face hard. He tries to fight
her, but she stabs him 3 quick times and re-grips his face. |
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JESSAME
(forces mouth open)
Now open up.... |
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She digs the small knife in his teeth and starts to pop them
out one by one as hard and painful as possible. Victor is
screaming in agony and shaking, wishing for it to stop.
After 6 teeth being taken out, she steps down off stool and
cuts rope so he falls down.
She looks at him, watching him squirm, watching him suffer.
She kicks him a few times. Victor curdles up in pain
bleeding bad from his stomach and mouth. Jess walks away and
comes back with the sledgehammer. She squats down and looks
at him. |
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|
66.
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| |
JESSAME
You know, you were right. Julie
did come to my house that night
and you know what? I had a little
fun with her too. Skinned her face
and chopped her up into pieces. |
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VICTOR
FUCK YOU (SPITS)!!! |
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Jess wipes the spit off her face. She becomes enraged. |
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JESSAME
FUCK ME? FUCK ME? OK.... |
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She stands up and lifts the sledgehammer up and goes for his
legs. She hits his feet first. Victor screams in agony. Then
she goes for the kneecaps. Victor can't take the pain and
starts to pass out. Jess drops the sledgehammer and slaps
Victor's face. |
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JESSAME
Oh don't fall asleep on me now.
I'm just getting warmed up. |
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|
She grabs sledgehammer again and goes for his stomach and
repeatedly smashes his body. She then goes for his face and
repeatedly smashes his face. The blood is flowing from his
body making a pool around her and his lifeless body. She's
cussing and talking shit to him the whole time she is
destroying his body.
She lifts the sledgehammer up and accidentally slips in the
blood and gets covered in it. She gets really pissed and
gets up and starts at it again. She finally can't lift the
sledgehammer up anymore and stops.
She breathes heavy, but feels relieved. She wipes her face
even though blood is all over her hands. She looks at
Victor's body and kicks it a few times and then spits on it
and walks away.
Screen goes black. |
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INT. A LOVER'S FAREWELL - MORNING |
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A couple of days past and Jessame has never felt better
about herself since everything started going south. She'e
lying bed enjoying her relaxation day when the phone rings. |
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67.
|
| |
JESSAME
(picks up)
Hello? |
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JAMES (OS)
good morning beautiful. |
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JESSAME
(smiles)
Hey handsome, what are you up to? |
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JAMES (OS)
Nothing just thinking about you. I
wanted to tell you not to plan
anything, because I'm taking you
somewhere special tonight and I
have a surprise for you. |
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JESSAME
(excited)
oooo. really? Where? and what did
you get me? |
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JAMES (OS)
It's a surprise, So I'll come get
you around 9 OK? |
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JESSAME
ok. see you later. Love you. |
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They hang up and Jess is excited and gets up and jumps on
bed for a minute and then gets back under covers and squeals
with excitement. |
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INT. A LOVER'S FAREWELL - EVENING |
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Jessame is getting ready for her date with James, She's
almost ready until she hears a knock on the door. |
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JESSAME
Hold on, be there in a minute. |
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She opens the door and it's James. |
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JAMES
(smiles)
Hey, sorry I'm a little early. I
brought you some flowers.
(shows flowers)
(MORE)
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JAMES (cont'd)
Hope you like them. |
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Jessame takes the flowers and smells them and let James in
and shuts the door. |
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JESSAME
These are beautiful. Thank you. |
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She sets them down on the table. |
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JESSAME
I'm going to get finished up ok? |
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JAMES
(walks closer to
Jess, Kisses her)
OK. |
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James sits down and takes a box out of his pocket and waits
for Jess to come back so they can leave. |
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JESSAME
(yells from room)
OK, I'm ready. |
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She walks out and James Stands up looking at her. |
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JAMES
You look beautiful.
(shows Jess box)
I got you something. |
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Jessame smiles and takes the box and opens it. She stops
smiling. Looks at James. |
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JESSAME
(serious)
Where'd you get this? |
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JAMES
At the jewelry store. |
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She takes the necklace out of the box. She holds it up. |
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JESSAME
(serious, getting
mad)
Is this a fuckin joke? Are you
fucking with me? Why do you have
Lisa's necklace? |
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69.
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JAMES
(nervous chuckle)
What?.. Take it easy, what are you
talking about? I bought that at
the jewelry store downtown off
Hollywood. |
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JESSAME
(Pissed and starts
to take off shoes)
No, you fucking didn't.
(walks towards
kitchen slowly)
I got that specially made for her.
There's not another one around. |
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James throws his hands up and sighs. |
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JAMES
Don't you understand, I did it for
you...I love you. I don't want
anyone hurting you anymore. |
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Jessame's heart drops and hatred fills her. She grabs the
knife out of the butcher block. |
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JESSAME
Don't you fucking touch me. |
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Jessame feels the tingling and the rage flowing inside of
her. She then comes to realize that this wasn't his first
time and gets a little excited, but can't get past him
killing her best friend. |
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JESSAME
(holding back
tears, furious)
You're that fucking guy killing
the girls in the woods huh? |
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James says nothing. Doesn't denying it either. Just shrugs
shoulders and grins. He walks up closer to her, Jess Lifts
up knife and James raises his hands. He then lunges for the
knife and grabs Jess and puts one of her hands behind her
back and puts knife to her throat. |
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JAMES
Now we have a problem. I don't
want to hurt you Jess, I know
you're like me. I can feel it. I
can feel your rage Jess. |
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JESSAME
(head butts him)
Fuck off (gets cut a little on
throat, you touch throat)! |
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Jessame goes for him, but he moves and slams her head on the
counter. He then throws her on the ground and she hits her
head against wall hard. She grabs her head and tries to get
up before James comes closer, but she can't. He lifts her up
and punches her over and over.
Jess laughs and spits in his face. He wipes off her spit and
smiles. He kisses her and she bites his lip not letting go.
He screams in agony. He hits her in the head but she bites
down harder. Blood is dripping from his mouth and then
suddenly Jess lets go and spits out a piece of his lip. She
laughs with blood coming out of her mouth.
James grabs his lip. |
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JAMES
(upset, mad, in
pain)
You bitch! I love you, don't you
get that! |
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JESSAME
You killed my best friend. FUCK
YOU! |
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Jess swings at him, but misses. James returns the swing and
connects. She falls down. James grabs her hair and drags her
in the living room. He starts to kick her. She moans in pain
with every kick. He finally stops and goes back to get the
knife. Jess is still struggling to catch her breath. He
comes back turns her over and stabs her once and knocks her
out.
Camera is on floor watching Jess getting dragged to his car
and puts her in the trunk. |
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INT. A LOVER'S FAREWELL - LATER |
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Camera pans on James' car and shows him pulling up into
jogging parking lot. The location is closed due to the
killings and no one is around. He opens up trunk and gets
her out. He drags her the whole time. Camera pans on
Jessame's face and shows her coming to. She's finally
coherent and she starts kicking her legs. She gets free and
get sup, but for get she got stabbed, so the pain kicks in
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when she starts to move. James grabs her hair and pulls her
down and punches her in the stomach. He then takes out his
knife and cuts her over and over.
Jess has no more energy to fight. She just gives in. She
sighs and lets off a chuckle. Jessame's face is bruised and
bloody, shes bleeding from her stomach and mouth and its
clear her fate has be chosen. James steps in front of her. |
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JAMES
I thought it would be fitting if
you died where your best friend
did.
(sits on her and
holds arms down)
I do want you to know that she
went out like trooper though. |
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Jessame is filled with rage and frustrated that she cannot
do anything. She turns her head. |
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JESSAME
(coughs up blood)
Just do it already! |
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JAMES
(Grabs her face
and turns towards
him)
I did love you though. |
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JESSAME
(cries a little)
I know. |
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James tilts her head and slits her throat watching the blood
leave from her. He then drags her to his dump site. While
this is happening camera is focused on Jessame's face even
though she's dead (sad dark music in background).
James then pushes down a hill and once she hits the bottom,
you see over 10 dead female bodies, cut up and bloody.
Camera pans back to Jessame and zooms in on her face and
then her blue eye. |
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FADE OUT. |
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| Feedback |
| From Nick Hanks |
Date 1/26/2013 |
0 stars |
| This was more of a disturbing mental collage than a screenplay, and if the genre was horror, it was not a horror film, it was just horrible, aweful. Sorry gotta be honest. Read some books on screenwriting, there are some very good ones on the subject. |
| From Daniel Siegel |
Date 1/15/2013 |
0 stars |
| Horrible but I don't like horror movies, so a horror fan may like it. |
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